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Here is the shore,
On which we separated.
Broke apart, like chain links shattering.
From the land we wave at you;
You wave back, smiling.
Please, come back!
Worry follows
Like a persistent fly.
Panic races on the beach, running with us.
Then the pain comes.
Abandoned
Others throw rocks,
Futile attempts to bring you back
A new morning comes,
Determination drags on.
We shout toward the ship
You’re a speck on the ocean
I realize you’ll disappear within in the hour,
That the earth is flat,
Our voices are drowning in the wind
Nothing we can do.
Returning to the beach
Searching, scanning the horizon
Left, moved on, vanished, removed.
You’ve fallen off the edge of our world
All that remains
Nothing physical
Just the shell of your memory,

And a figuratively broken necklace.
©2007-2009 ~Zovi
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Author's Comments

It's been awhile since I posted any writings.

I hope the person this is meant for manages to wander over to my page and reads it....

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:iconfauxafflictionx:
:aww:

thats touching.

Reminds me of a certain video game actually.

Goodbyes are usually pretty depressing...

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Oro!?
:iconzovi:
Yeah.. unless whoever you're saying goodbye to was mean to you. Then they're not so bad. :P

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"When you're running an hour behind, that's TARDY. When you're running an era behind, that's CLASSIC."
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I have Written over 300 songs.... 12 of which Warner bros. almost... ALMOST got rights to. AND this is very creative poetry. Nice work!!

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Replication be my Master
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:iconmahoutragicqueen:
Nice atmosphere.

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